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gavin bust practice

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Been sketchig abit. This one took me 45 mins. Still working on it. hurray crappy phone photo xD

Gavin: [link]

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also for #Improvement-Club its still a work in progress but i need a little more help because it still feels cartoony to me. thanks or any advice in general would be nice ^-^
Image size
2448x3264px 2.41 MB
Make
SAMSUNG
Model
SGH-I927
Shutter Speed
1397571923/4673109 second
Aperture
F/299.1
Focal Length
4 mm
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Jirba's avatar
<3 BEAUTIFUL <3
i think what's making him look cartoony are his eyes, they're a bit too big. Make sure you find a good reference or even a face drawing tutorial so you can understand the size of the eyes in proportion to the rest of the face. Maybe that's something to work on in your next sketch, since it'd be a shame to erase them because they're really well drawn!!
Also, the lower lip should be lighter than the upper lip as it is further out and gets more light.

other than a few things, this still looks really nice though. keep doin portraits!!!!